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ToSaferHarbours
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Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:07 am
ToSaferHarbours says... · Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:07 am
So, I can review a work of yours if you like!

What I'll review:

Poetry (my favorite)
Essays
Shorts (Please not fantasy or sci-fi - a few mystical/fantasy/dystopian elements are fine; just make sure it's not way out)

I'll review as soon as I can! :)

And if you could return the favor, that would be very much appreciated. Review one of my works here:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97876

or here:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97891


Thanks and I'm looking forward to reading your work! :)
Last edited by ToSaferHarbours on Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:03 pm, edited 3 times in total.




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klara1882
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Sun Nov 18, 2012 5:06 pm
klara1882 says... · Sun Nov 18, 2012 5:06 pm
Hey, I would be very glad if you'd review this for me. It's been a while since I've posted it and it's stil reviewless XD Thanks!

work.php?id=97947
But they all didn’t see the little bit of sadness in me.




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Clarity
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Tue Nov 20, 2012 10:26 pm
Clarity says... · Tue Nov 20, 2012 10:26 pm
work.php?id=97924 A review on this would be helpful, don't know how to end the poem... any tips would also be great! Thanks.
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


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Clarity
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Tue Nov 20, 2012 10:27 pm
Clarity says... · Tue Nov 20, 2012 10:27 pm
work.php?id=97924 This link should work
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


Home is where the books are kept.




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BlackXcat
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Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:17 pm
BlackXcat says... · Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:17 pm
work.php?id=98077

Id appreciate some input. Be gentle :P

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