Gravity's Out of This World Reviews!

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Gravity
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Tue May 24, 2016 12:32 pm
Gravity says... · Tue May 24, 2016 12:32 pm
Pretty Please?
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)




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TahaT11n
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TahaT11n
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Tue May 24, 2016 12:45 pm
TahaT11n says... · Tue May 24, 2016 12:45 pm
A help.. PLSSSS

here's the link. if you can, pls review it now.

what's the food that you need, btw??




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passenger
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Tue May 24, 2016 2:13 pm
passenger says... · Tue May 24, 2016 2:13 pm
I could always use more reviews on this. Two?

Help would be greatly appreciated, as I'm submitting this story to a contest. :wink:

Thanks!
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky's Perks of Being a Wallflower




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soundofmind
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Wed May 25, 2016 4:58 pm
soundofmind says... · Wed May 25, 2016 4:58 pm
Uh... if you're interested!!!...This could use a review!
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




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elysian
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Fri May 27, 2016 6:42 pm
elysian says... · Fri May 27, 2016 6:42 pm
I Don't Usually Write Happy Poems

please & thank you
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.




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yizhongt
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Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:18 am
yizhongt says... · Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:18 am
Hey there. If you're up to it, could you please review the chapters of my WIP novel Starlight? I'll link you the first chapter.

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!




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Laurenh6
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Sun Aug 14, 2016 6:36 am
Laurenh6 says... · Sun Aug 14, 2016 6:36 am
Hi! Would you be interested in reading my series of the Watching - there's only 3 chapters at the moment . But I'd love to read along with any novels you may have in return :) - thanks !

Oh and here's the links

Watching

Watching Chapter 2

Watching Chapter 3

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