in my story their is a little contradiction with the way my female character reacts both physically and in conversation with this boy compared to her thoughts. Its like she's two different people- easily intimidated with males because of her abusive step-father and yet she has these steamy thoughts of the boy. Anyone have any advice on how I can bring these things together a lot more?
You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better. — Anne Lamott
