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Phantasos

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Phantasos lingers: crouched, hunched,
nose buried in borrowed poppies.

He is fragments and run-ons taken out of context,
stygian white and green as sin, failing wings over lakes,
bookends and lampshades scrawled with Ovid
and those ciphers from which
we have built the world.
Bitter Charlie :: Shady Grove, CA :: FreeRice (162,000/1,000,000)




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I enjoyed this - and this is a fair piece of work, as long as you are aware that what you have written is nothing more than what it is striving to define.
Carpe Diem.



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien