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@Tikaya blue and red are standalone poetries and when you read them combined, just go left to right skipping over the gaps (advance to the next line only after you're done with this one. basically you're going blue-red-blue..
I'm glad the hopeful tone got across in Felix's lyrics and you're spot on about Aiden's too. Aiden's last 'it' actually doesn't make a place in the together poetry though, take it a flaw of my writing or heavy symbolism. A defect in what was turning out to be harmony, or maybe because Aiden had the last word (by disappearing) but that doesn't go well by Felix. There's something extra in Aiden's story that Felix didn't know / had a part in.
Again, thank you, tikaa. You always make my day.
I'm glad the hopeful tone got across in Felix's lyrics and you're spot on about Aiden's too. Aiden's last 'it' actually doesn't make a place in the together poetry though, take it a flaw of my writing or heavy symbolism. A defect in what was turning out to be harmony, or maybe because Aiden had the last word (by disappearing) but that doesn't go well by Felix. There's something extra in Aiden's story that Felix didn't know / had a part in.
Again, thank you, tikaa. You always make my day.