*sigh* The Jon/Kyle-ness is so wonderful! Though...I could have sensed flirting from Jon, he did ask Kyle if they were on a date afterwords so, that's good. And I loved Kyle's reaction, but he's still shy to Jon's affection! One time he wants to jump him and the next he's like...um, this could be a date, yeah. Whatever makes you happy. lol, But they're so cute. And I had to look up that last part, the schematic lung...wow. And the beginning did confuse me for a little while. lol, so Jon...is imagining this. I don't know, I could have sworn I read one of these parts before...it would be very odd if I dreamed this. Can't wait for the next! The puzzle already begins!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death. — An Unknown Bride, Leap Year
