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Faraway Winter

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Faraway Winter

Walking along a path painted with white,
In the distance, there shines a light...

Snowflakes rain down a joyful dance,
Touching down onto the palm of my hand.
A moon hangs in the sky, poking at the trees,
Illuminating a heart full of grief.

Open your eyes, let a dream fly,
And unfold a new picture of a colourful life.

Holding your hand, I spread my wings,
Soaring high above where guardian angels sing.
The elegance of a white world traps me in an imaginary ring,
A beautiful image reflected in a frozen sea.

My spirit flies, carrying a bright illusion,
Sending it free into the distance.
Climbing a mountain sprinkled with innocence,
Seemed like an unbelievable vision.

It feels so free to ride a mirage,
To unfold a picture of a childhood fairytale.

Holding your hand, we reach the sky,
Soaring into an unlimited future, sinking into time.
Standing in front of destiny's sunrise,
I clearly remember seeing a blaze of wishes in your eyes.

Walking into an endless world of white,
In the distance, a future shines bright...




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wow, this is absolutely beautifully written.
i really liked your discriptions, and emotions.
this felt good to read, gives a good feeling.
you are very good.

kim



I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind