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Last edited by darkdove on Fri May 16, 2008 2:42 am, edited 4 times in total.




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well this is interesting. I never read a poem like this before. I like it. I enjoyed it very much, continue your work. :D




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Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good.
The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which i found sad, because this poem has alot of potential.

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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price