Crushed

Well, I did like this poem.... but I do think you could have added a little more.... Maybe you could tell us what you like about him... Maybe this could exstend into a short story... Maybe? No, just a thought.

This feels very "teenage melodrama."

I suggest putting some more meat on its bones.

Your right. I will get around to it... Someday. When I feel it! Ya knows?
Thank you!