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Aedomir
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:27 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:27 pm
You don't have to do that! That's nice of you! Actually, what you might want to do is rea the one n the advanced crit forum, then add #8 #9 and #10 to it. But you don't have to! Really, it makes me feel guilty :?
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:29 pm
Gwenevire says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:29 pm
I want to! Its my job, I love to read and help out people. It will take me a while though :)
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Jasmine Hart
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:30 pm
Jasmine Hart says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:30 pm
I'd love one on this, if you have time.If you don't, don't worry.

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Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:02 pm
BigBadBear says... · Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:02 pm
Hey Gwen! Thanks for doing this!

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Would love help on this.
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