Opinions Please!!

So. My title at the moment is The Gods Were Crying.
But, due to a bit of a plot change, the Gods AREN'T crying, so it really doesn't fit.

What do you think of these?:

Whispering Gods
The Gods Whispered
Tears of Eylasia

Any other suggestions? I feel like my head's gonna explode

How bout "The Whispers of the Gods." or "Whisper of the Gods"

I feel very, extremely stupid for asking this but..... what's your NaNo about?
*looks down in shame*
I'll help if I know what its about...
~MV

It's a sort of epic fantasy thingy, with several subplots. Basically,the Shadowgods and Godspirits are fighting for control of Eylasia (a realm), and are battling it out through control and manipulation of the people. SO yes, big war.

There's a godmarked woman, who has visions and is trying to figure out what they need, blah blah blah

I was thinking of WHISPERING GODS, because it suggests influence...

Why not go for something more symbolic and subtle? For example, 'Murmers in the Mountains'.

Oooh mumers in the mountains. Illiteration!

It's aliteration.

Thunder that was such a random post.

Well anyways,

You should go with something that is not obvious. Trying using a line from a poem or using something that is poetic or a play on words.

The Gods Were Crying could easily be:

And then the Sky Cried

They Who Rained Sorrow

Tears Beyond Heaven

Something along those lines. I hope I helped,

~Angel

Angel those are awesome! Hmmm.............how about "War between the worlds" Just joking!

But seriously. What about......"The Tears That Stained" or "The Ever Changing Whisper"? I hope this helped!

The Sky Bled?

And Then The Sky Cried (is awesome!!!)

Tears of Heaven



I also really really like They Who Rained Sorrow...

Hmm these are all sounding good, but you have to ask yoruself which one fits best with your story?

Hope your nano is going well!

(p.s. I like Kitty's idea - 'Murmers in the Mountains')

Meevs
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