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Siddham ( Perfection)

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Lama Tian Na...

Incense rising, plooms of mantra.
Taking flight with dusty wings,
I soar through my primal thoughts.

Om mae mae om...

Arcane verses, repeated - eternal.
Muttered with incandescent tounges,
filling the air with dulcet tones.

Siddham...

Perfection.




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Hm...this was short, but at the same time, it was quite nice. I think if it was a little longer, it could have been better.

Anyway, this wasn't bad at all. Good work.
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Hello kris!

Ugh it seems as though I don't read enough of your work. I actually like this. I love the way it was cultured and the words flowed well and it was short and sweet and beautiful, as always.

Favorite Part:
Arcane verses, repeated - eternal.
Muttered with incandescent tounges,
filling the air with dulcet tones.

Siddham...

Perfection.


May I give you a gold star?

Good job!

Ta,

~Angel
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.




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Ty Angel ^^ you do dote on my ego so *blushes*.



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien