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TNCowgirl · 2008-12-29T19:34:51Z

***Here is where you can find a Roman name. http://babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/category-roman-names.html *** Aurora hung up the wash on the line humming softly. She heard the sound of the horses in the background and her dog whimpered at her feet. "I'll feed you in a little bit, Leo." She smiled at the dog as she hung up the last article of clothes. "ROMAN SOLDIERS COMING! ROMAN SOLDIERS COMING!" The town crier yelled. She jumped up and ran towards her house. "RAIDING SOLDIERS! RAIDING SOLDIERS!" "Aurora, get out of here now, take Alin and go!" Her father yelled as the pounding of the soldiers' horses filled her ears. She turned and ran towards the small corral behind their house and jumped on Alin's back. Leo, still a puppy, in her hands as she bent over Alin's back and raced towards the desert in front of her. "STOP!" A soldier yelled. "Run, Alin, run!" She soothed to the horse who picked up it's pace. "Catch the runner!" Someone yelled. She hugged Alin's mane tigher as he raced forward. She closed her eyes tightly as he ran. "Stop that horse!" A soldier yelled from close behind. "Faster, Alin, please faster!" She cried as the horse streched his legs otu again. She screamed when a soldier grabbed the reins for Alin pulling him to a stop. She tried to jump off Alin's back but her hands were quickly tied behind her back and Alin led back towards the town. Leo sat on the back of Alin's rump growling at the men. "Hush." She whispered, she dind't want him to die. When they got back to the town she looked at her family held behind a line of soldiers ready to be taken to the roman town. She couldn't lose her family, she couldn't lose Alin and Leo. She kicked Alin's sides and he jumped forward running through a line of soldiers as she leaned forward praying she wouldn't fall off. Leo bit the back of her clothes to keep himself on.

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Tue Mar 03, 2009 2:38 pm

TNCowgirl says... · Tue Mar 03, 2009 2:38 pm

Aurora frowned when a snakes head slowly started coming up out of the pot. He nearly dropped it but she caught it. She grabbed the snake by the neck and handed him back the pot pulling the snake out of the pot and looking at it.

"No wonder it was cheap, it had a death wish in it." She said as she looked at the posinis snake.

***Tears, and it's fine***

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