A story? Eek! All right. I'll review it... I'm always up for an excellent short story! But you should review some pieces too. That way, you'll make people happy and they'll be more inclined to critique your stuff.
Also, welcome to YWS!
Two welcome threads? Tsk, tsk!
This one is locked.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory. — Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)
