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Check How Much You've Grown

Nate · 2009-07-09T17:41:57Z

I'm always amazed by how much people change after only a few months on this site. It's not that they themselves change, but rather that they're able to convey themselves more fluently online. Often, someone will join with ridiculous grammar, but will then have excellent grammar only six months later. I'm not just talking about posts either; the same goes for stories, poems, critiques, etc. It's amazing how much someone can grow in such a short time. So I thought it would be interesting if everyone posted their first review here. If you're having trouble finding it, just post any of your first ten posts. Here's mine from the now defunct TYWC: Ah, a guilt story, I nice change from all the others today. This was good and I like the idea. But you could've made this longer by describing her walk home more vividly and how she looked at him while he was going away (ie. His cold piercing eyes stared at me, intently, as he was dragged away.) Okay, so mine isn't much better, but oh well. Good story ;)