Hallo buddy! Glad to see you writing again! This time there were only a few grammar mistakes, so let's address them.
Why I'm being so pulled to it?
Why am I, it should be. The way you have it reads out: why I am...?
Through a glass wall I can see televisions and all of them are saying the same - breaking news eh.
At least put a comma after breaking news, so it's not as awkwardly read.
But by who though?
Comma after who. Again, makes it less awkwardly read. Also, grammar rules, y'know. :}
You also had a few comma splices, but since I use them like air, I feel hypocritical pointing them out.
So, my dear friend, I want you to listen to what I say and not what anyone else says. This was fantastic! The first paragraph literally defined my feelings, and in the end it brought out your character. This was a gorgeous piece of work, and by no means cliche or "without meat". I truly hope you continue writing like this.
“Rise like Lions after slumber
In unvanquishable number.
Shake your chains to earth like dew
Which in sleep had fallen on you—
Ye are many—they are few.” — Mary Shelly
