O.o This started out okay, then it got intense. I don't know what else to say about something like this. I do like it, however. I enjoy how it has a kind of sarcastic tone because in the reader's head, they're reading it to the tune of that song. Very good.
"But it's unlikely, because you don't like me, and I don't like me, and it's unlikely..."
I really like this song and thought it was really funny. I didn't quite understand why you had to use so much repetition because it only made the lyric twice as long in which it didn't need to be. Also, maybe you're from Australia or England or whatever, but what the hell does "butters" signify?
When the microwave blew up, I was in my room reading comics. My entire family turned into superheroes. Only I remained completely normal… — Norman Normal (1999 series)
