helloo I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write.. You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then I don't have any criticism for you nice work! -qaralynn-
"If they can't be with you at your worst, then they don't deserve to be with you at your best." -Murtuza-
"Even though a ship won't sink at sea, it needs to be steered to get home."
In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of
worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to
eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort. — JRR Tolkien
