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Vampyre
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Wed May 25, 2011 7:10 pm
Vampyre says... · Wed May 25, 2011 7:10 pm
Hey, would you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you dear :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






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Loller65
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Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:41 am
Loller65 says... · Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:41 am
Folks! I'm looking to stockpile points! I probably won't use them, but it feels good to have them!

Give me stuff to review!
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Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
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