Not Forever

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I really like this, its sweet and makes me smile. The only thing I'd say other than the few things from what others said was instead of "anyways" at the end I would simply make it "anyway" I don't know but it would sound better I think. Overall I liked it.
~Nightlyowl



I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom