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Hey, DM! coco here again! Boy, am I glad you've put up chapter 2, it was so awesome and let me tell you why :arrow: Firstly, your MC - I ...

Hey, ofir! Here's my review! The Party - chapter four The gate creaked as usual as I walked the stone road to my house. The hairs on the back of ...

Hey, Coco here! I don't really have anything to nit-pick here. This story sounds awesome, I especially like the names you've given your character's - very creative and they sound ...

Hey, Lisa, chocolate lover here to review :smt003 I haven't done a review like this EVER so here goes... Chapter 1 Fear, blood, and tears. The smell was so strong, ...

Hey, Sean! Coco here :smt003 This is really good for something that's just a collection of thoughts you've knocked together! :shock: I'll start with what I love. This is really ...

Attolia and Canislupis have beat me to it again! I have to agree this is so much better than chapter 2, I really feel like you've got your MC back, ...

Hey, kr1117, coco here! I'll probably come back and give a proper review later on but right now my advice would be to break this up into paragraphs, it will ...

Hi Skutter11, Coco here! Hmm, I have to agree with Silentpages, this is interesting but there seems to be something missing, I can't quite put my finger on it myself. ...

Well it seems Canislups and Attolia have said it all. Like I said in my review of your first chapter I do like this story but similar problems that occurred ...

Hey ofir! Coco here, hoping to help with a review. Here goes... So I like this but I think that there are a few things that could be worked on: ...

Hey ultraviolet! Coco here, I really like this for a number of reasons. One, your narrative is really well done, simple but revealing of your MC's personality which I love ...

This is unbelievably awesome! I was honestly hooked from the start, I haven't read anything like this here so it was incredibly exciting to read. Welcome to YWS and best ...

Thanks, Nike!

Hey classy! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what ...

Hey amy! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what ...