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Brilliant nit-picks, lol, how embarrassing! What would I do without you all!

Wow look at how generous you are! Please can I get reviews for my story. It's a romantic fiction called Of Loss and Love, there are currently 4 parts to ...

Of Loss and Love: chapter four Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] “ALL RISE FOR LADY ROSALINE!” ...

The previous reviewer is right you really need to sort out those capitals because it's extremely important, not only because your supposed to, but because for a reader, reading something ...

I should start reading the historical fiction section a lot more, the stories here are brilliant and yours is one of them! I love how you begin your story; you ...

This is quite cool and quite creepy at the same time! What I love about it is that it sounds like the beginning of a really gripping story. You leave ...

Thank you, I'll look into that!

Thanks, did some changes

Of Loss and Love: chapter three Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] The following day I entered ...

Hmm, this story is lacking something and I can't quite put my finger on it. Firstly the beginning at times, sounded a bit strange. For example, "Blow out the candles.." ...

Great prologue! You have me gripped already! I love the emotions you describe, they're very deep and at the same time terrifying. I'm really looking forward to reading more. It ...

I'm going to be honest and I hope you won't take this to heart. Firstly the beginning made it seem like a blurb of a story book I don't know ...