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re-edited! check it out!

* :shock: * LOOOOOOVVVVEEEE IT! please pm me when you write more! zOMG! I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen! ~jen

What! No critiques? Oh well, if you read this at least try and leave a comment. I'm sending this off for a competition.

*fals heplessly in love* That, was deep man. Any guys that can express the way they feel liek that is deep. It was beautiful. Brilliant. ~jen

i agree. hey what beat is it?

what? no critques. i thought it was good

yeah sorry about that. i just was trying to find...i dont know... a catch phrase?

i guess but shes scared. that can make you do some pretty crazy things...

I really liked it. I'm looking forward to you posting more. pm me when you do ~chao

ok...reedited!

well....finally! the whole perpose of this poem was basically because i was bored..... and because i wanted to show a meaning. dont give up unless you have no other choice....that ...

ehh...where did all the critiques go? chapter 3 is comiong up tommorow

i think the titles fine. i really liked it but you could make it just a little bit longer. i hope you do continue with this story, i actually quite ...

please critique. very important!

YEA!!!!! *jumps up and down*