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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ...

    Hey Soul! IWow, this is the second poem of yours I review today! Then, I'll dismiss the introductions ^_^ Line by Line! She hears a call in the distance. Could ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The mind of one

    Hi Soul! (Nice name :P) I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will be your reviewer! Now, let's see! Line by line! A dark shadow creeps beneath The surface ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cento

    Hi Araidne! Nice to meet you, dear, I'm Kat. First off I wanted to ask you something: are the poems were the lines were token from written by you? If ...

    May 14, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: my interpratation of the song:Broken strings, James Morrison

    Hi lil! I'm Kat, nice to meet you! This caught my eye, because I love that song! I think you should change your title, because some people might assume your ...

    May 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Please Listen

    Hi Layla! I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will review your piece! :D Stanza by stanza! I feel I'm not good enough to be called your daughter. You ...

    May 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: into the cracks of the earth

    Hi JFW! *stares at SpongeBob* *waves SpongeBob imaginary flag* Anyway, onto your review, dear! Stanza by stanza! what would you do if I took a chance dared to dream and ...

    May 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Diary of a teenage disaster 5

    Hi Megan! Good, I really liked this story of yours ^_^ Let's get onto your review! Grammar and Punctuation Or the first day of school as my parents call it. ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Beach scene

    Wow! *stares at computer screen* Shauni reviewed fiction! *throws blue confetti* Anyway, hi elly! Welcome to YWS, dear. As Shauni, has mentioned, only check the Welcoming forum on Monday. There's ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Smile For Me

    Hi molk! I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will review this delightful piece. I believe this is the first review, at least it is right now. Now, onto ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: -Deleted-

    Hi Megan! I believe we have met, but for every details, I'm Kat. Now, onto your review! Stanza by stanza! [line by line] When did I start feeling the weight ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My angel

    Oh, Angel! Such a beautiful piece! Welcome to YWS, dear. You sure made your way rocking. I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will review this lovely piece! My ...

    May 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: -Deleted-

    Hi Megan! *waves at computer screen* I'm Kat, and I'm here for a review -- as requested! Stanza by Stanza! All of my life, I have watched you, climbing mountains, ...

    May 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: i wish..

    Hi Telle! I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will review this piece! I wish everything would simply be a dream. And then i could always be with you. ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Death is liken to an enamoured rose

    Hi Velvet! Great name, by the way. I believe we haven't met before. I'm Kat, nice to meet you (:D) and I will review this piece. I. Facing death brings ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nocturne

    Hi Crysi. I'm Kat, I don't believe we have met. Anyway, I'm sorry I can't give you a good and helpful review: I could only find one nit-pick. Her audience ...

    May 5, 2009


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien