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Re: The Journey
Thanks 'outofthebox'. I should have said it was more of a journey through my life so far rather than highschool. I know it's confusing without that bit of information but ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: The End
Hey yumyums. Let me first say I love your name. yumyums. it makes me giggle :P I really liked this piece. Not just because it reminded me of my boyfriend ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: The Journey
The delicate blades of grass stroke her skin. With eyes closed she lies there, feeling the warm rays of sunlight gently caress her body. Oblivious to anything but there and ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Toby's Lunch
This is just plain twisted. I LLLIKE it!!!! =D You definately have a warped imagination ;) something I can relate to. I love it when writers/directors mix the innocence of ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: True Intentions
What do you meaaaan this isn't very good?! I certainly liked it. =] I'm very curious. What were they?? Ordinary homicidal maniacs?? Or something more supernatural..? Either way I found ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Broken Birds
Wooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwww!!!! This is amazing. You have such a talent. This piece has such a dreary feeling to it but it's extremely well written. And such a unique idea. Well done. ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Crystalline
I really like where you're going with this story. Were you planning on expanding it? The idea of living for such a long time is one that appeals to me ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Existence
Thanks a bunch =D Now that I look back I wonder why I didn't expand on how the character was able to live as long as she did. I knew ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Existence
(This is my first post ever. Please read and review honestly. Also any other suggestions for a title would be very much appreciated. Thanks, Ced xx) Yesterday I woke up ...
Mar 31, 2009 -
Re: Child
Wow. This story was disturbing but in such an appealing way. Although the male character is a pedophile, it's hard to see him as one in the way you've written ...
Mar 31, 2009 -
Re: Play-Pretend
This piece is quite moving. It makes one wonder where the inspiration for it came from though. For your sake I hope the character of the wife is not one ...
Mar 31, 2009
