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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journey

    Thanks 'outofthebox'. I should have said it was more of a journey through my life so far rather than highschool. I know it's confusing without that bit of information but ...

    Jun 18, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The End

    Hey yumyums. Let me first say I love your name. yumyums. it makes me giggle :P I really liked this piece. Not just because it reminded me of my boyfriend ...

    May 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journey

    The delicate blades of grass stroke her skin. With eyes closed she lies there, feeling the warm rays of sunlight gently caress her body. Oblivious to anything but there and ...

    May 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Toby's Lunch

    This is just plain twisted. I LLLIKE it!!!! =D You definately have a warped imagination ;) something I can relate to. I love it when writers/directors mix the innocence of ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: True Intentions

    What do you meaaaan this isn't very good?! I certainly liked it. =] I'm very curious. What were they?? Ordinary homicidal maniacs?? Or something more supernatural..? Either way I found ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Broken Birds

    Wooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwww!!!! This is amazing. You have such a talent. This piece has such a dreary feeling to it but it's extremely well written. And such a unique idea. Well done. ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Crystalline

    I really like where you're going with this story. Were you planning on expanding it? The idea of living for such a long time is one that appeals to me ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Other Re: Existence

    Thanks a bunch =D Now that I look back I wonder why I didn't expand on how the character was able to live as long as she did. I knew ...

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Other Re: Existence

    (This is my first post ever. Please read and review honestly. Also any other suggestions for a title would be very much appreciated. Thanks, Ced xx) Yesterday I woke up ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Child

    Wow. This story was disturbing but in such an appealing way. Although the male character is a pedophile, it's hard to see him as one in the way you've written ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Play-Pretend

    This piece is quite moving. It makes one wonder where the inspiration for it came from though. For your sake I hope the character of the wife is not one ...

    Mar 31, 2009


Steps to enlightenment brighten the way, but the steps are steep. Take them one at a time.
— Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice)