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Re: Tired of Procrastination?
That's one useful little tool! I always have the tendency to open Word and then proceed to get distracted by the wonder that's called the internet. On multiple occasions I've ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Eir's Dream part 2
Here I am again! :) The laughter that followed sounded hollow and vaguely unreal. Nishant looked away; he knew that she was only displaying half of her true form, but ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Eir's Dream part 1
I read this part of your prologue (I realize it's not the whole thing) and I'll tell you what I think about it. :) “Quickly, in here.” Silvani shoved her ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Vulnerable
It's not often that I read a poem I actually like, but I liked this. It flows very nicely and I like the imagery. I agree with God that it's ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Step through the glass, Alice
You're very welcome. So Anyu is a puppy.. Well, I definitely wasn't able to guess that much from the text, I'm afraid. She's a talking puppy then? Perhaps it wasn't ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Step through the glass, Alice
I'm not really sure whether I liked this or not. It was very short and especially in the beginning a bit confusing. I'll point out a couple of things I ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at writing a novel
Hey there! I read your chapter as I said I would and will now tell you what I thought of it. :) Since WaterVyper already took care of most of ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Bewildering
I was looking through the pieces in Other Fiction and I noticed nobody had reviewed this piece yet. I think you did quite well considering the length of it. But ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: past tense vs. present tense
I always write in the past tense. For some reason I can't stand reading or writing anything written in the present tense. I just keep stumbling along the sentences when ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Couple in a Cafe
I rather liked it. There wasn't very much going on, but it was interesting enough to finish reading. WaterVyper already pointed out some small mistakes, so I won't repeat those, ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: A.I.R.
That sounds like an interesting story to me. You really made me curious about the conspiracies and, perhaps stupidly enough, what those wings look like. xD If you ever post ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Musical Influences
I like to write with music in the background, but I can write without it as well. I usually make a playlist for the story I'm working on with music ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
I didn't start writing seriously until one or two years ago, but I wrote my first story when I was about seven years old. It was a two page story ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Parking Lot Sparrows (1) [Edit 03/04]
So, here's my first review on YWS.. ^-^ I really liked this story, in fact I'm a very shy person and haven't reviewed any other stories yet because of that, ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Glasses or contacts
I've been wearing glasses since I was fourteen. Although glasses weren't exactly what I wanted, I really didn't want contacts. I'd heard too many negative things about them to want ...
Jan 20, 2008
