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  • Writing Tips Re: Tired of Procrastination?

    That's one useful little tool! I always have the tendency to open Word and then proceed to get distracted by the wonder that's called the internet. On multiple occasions I've ...

    Jan 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue to Eir's Dream part 2

    Here I am again! :) The laughter that followed sounded hollow and vaguely unreal. Nishant looked away; he knew that she was only displaying half of her true form, but ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue to Eir's Dream part 1

    I read this part of your prologue (I realize it's not the whole thing) and I'll tell you what I think about it. :) “Quickly, in here.” Silvani shoved her ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Vulnerable

    It's not often that I read a poem I actually like, but I liked this. It flows very nicely and I like the imagery. I agree with God that it's ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Step through the glass, Alice

    You're very welcome. So Anyu is a puppy.. Well, I definitely wasn't able to guess that much from the text, I'm afraid. She's a talking puppy then? Perhaps it wasn't ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Step through the glass, Alice

    I'm not really sure whether I liked this or not. It was very short and especially in the beginning a bit confusing. I'll point out a couple of things I ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My first attempt at writing a novel

    Hey there! I read your chapter as I said I would and will now tell you what I thought of it. :) Since WaterVyper already took care of most of ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bewildering

    I was looking through the pieces in Other Fiction and I noticed nobody had reviewed this piece yet. I think you did quite well considering the length of it. But ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: past tense vs. present tense

    I always write in the past tense. For some reason I can't stand reading or writing anything written in the present tense. I just keep stumbling along the sentences when ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Couple in a Cafe

    I rather liked it. There wasn't very much going on, but it was interesting enough to finish reading. WaterVyper already pointed out some small mistakes, so I won't repeat those, ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: A.I.R.

    That sounds like an interesting story to me. You really made me curious about the conspiracies and, perhaps stupidly enough, what those wings look like. xD If you ever post ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Musical Influences

    I like to write with music in the background, but I can write without it as well. I usually make a playlist for the story I'm working on with music ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: At what age did you start writing and

    I didn't start writing seriously until one or two years ago, but I wrote my first story when I was about seven years old. It was a two page story ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Parking Lot Sparrows (1) [Edit 03/04]

    So, here's my first review on YWS.. ^-^ I really liked this story, in fact I'm a very shy person and haven't reviewed any other stories yet because of that, ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Glasses or contacts

    I've been wearing glasses since I was fourteen. Although glasses weren't exactly what I wanted, I really didn't want contacts. I'd heard too many negative things about them to want ...

    Jan 20, 2008


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain