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Re: Life (for school, need reviews ASAP please)
Hey Wolf! I really liked your poem! The one thing I noticed was the words you used, they really made it all flow nicely. I personally think you descibed these ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Anne Rice's vampires
Thank you soooo much, I was ordering them today and hahah I wasn't sure about it. =]
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Anne Rice's vampires
So the 9th book is the last? I'm thinking of ordering all the books, but I'm a fast reader.. so I want them all at once. Haha. I haven't read ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: A World Apart
If you asked me how we got here, I wouldn't know how to respond. If you asked me how we got here, it's not a subject of which I am ...
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: Anyone speak french? Please help. Due tomorrow.
Thanks so much! It is wayyyyy better now!
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: How to string everything together
Ooh thankyou, I'll give this a try. [=
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: How to string everything together
Wow! I really like this idea! I might just go try it right now! Thanks so much! You are a lifesaver. =]
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: How to string everything together
I really need help! I've been trying to write a book for, oh, probably 2 years now, but I can't seem to put it all together. Well in fact, I ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1-The Queen
Oooh I really enjoyed this piece. I couldn't find too much wrong with it, one thing: Even in this massive uproar , footsteps could be heard as they marched through ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Anyone speak french? Please help. Due tomorrow.
Thank you so much! Well I have been in french immersion since Kindergarten, but I'd say I'm better at speaking it then writing it. I'm also prone to missing my ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Anyone speak french? Please help. Due tomorrow.
So we've had to write paragraphs about some poems we've written. I was just wondering if anyone who spoke french could look at the grammatical aspect of my paragraphs. I ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: The Beginning((prologue rewrite))
Helloooo I really liked your piece, it was very interesting and absorbing. I really liked your descriptions. In my opinion they were vivid and not overly descriptive. The one thing ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: West of Forgetfulness River
I was quite drawn to your story. However, I am a bit confused. Maybe you should explain what she's doing away from her homeland more? Unless of course you decide ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: The Diamond Ground
I really liked your piece. There was a few things that I noticed, He spun the rough box in his hands, surveying each and every side thoroughly. I like this ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: The View From A Hot Air Balloon
Wow! This poem was beyond captivating. I really enjoyed it. I couldn't find any mistakes. However, there was this one line that I didn't really flow in my opinion; Across ...
May 21, 2008
