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Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
(Yes this all really happened to me, don't worry though, there is more love story on its way I promise.) Wait what? This actually happened? :? Well anyways, this was ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: I am Changed.
Wow, this is a really neat idea. I liked how the poem flowed and the language you used. I did notice however that this poem could be about anything. If ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: The truth about celebrity.
Good poem. It seems like you really knew what you were talking about. :wink: Mostly every thing that needs to be said has been said, but there was this one ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Stupid Mistake
Wow! Good one. I really like the way you wrote the poem. At first I was a little unsure, but after reading it a second time I realized that it ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: this is me i guess^.^
Twilight is a really good book. Can't say I liked New Moon as much. Eclispe was pretty good though still. I just kind of wish the book didn't get so ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: this is me i guess^.^
Hey Kimmy! What is your novel about? I'm trying to write a novel as well.. it is not coming along as great as I was hoping it would. I love ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Writer's Block revised
I think is a really interesting idea. It was well written, but I think you should use more desciptive words in some parts. Also there is something about this one ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: blinkk.
Awh I loved this poem! It was simply amazing. Maybe break the poem into different paragraphs. Other than that it was great, keep writing poems like this one. =]
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Last Regrets
An overwhelming feeling, taking over your mind; decisions may be tough. Wondering, repenting, apologizing a gnawing pain growing; lasting forever. So it seems, hard to forget, though the feeling begin
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Wuthering Heights
This is definately one of my favorite books. It was surprisingly good. I figured I would have been bored after the first little bit, but I enjoyed it. I can't ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Trickster's Choice
I think these were some of her best books. I can't say I really enjoyed some of her other pieces. But Trickster's Choice and Trickster's Queen were really good. I ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Extras
I enjoyed Uglies, but the ones after it were not as good. Though Pretties and Specials were not so bad, I can't really say I liked Extra's.
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Rose Madder, Stephen King
So this book was pretty good? Was it scary at all? I'm looking for a good scary book and I can't seem to find one. I read The Talisman and ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Children of Power
Wow. I really liked this one. I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes. The one thing though was that it was one HUGE block of writing. Maybe divide it ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Forever and a Day [Preface and Chapter 1]
PREFACE He hid among the shadows, sinking deeper and deeper into the endless dark. From his hiding place he watched her shake in her sleep. The moonlight streaming in from ...
Apr 7, 2008
