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defiitly long- like this was a rap long not a heavy metal long-

shit!!!!!!!!!!!!teamwork is better the the original crap---------------just team up withthis guy and your poems will be better but ot your stories because those are already good

ok enough with this junk about weed being bad if you havent tried it then dont judge it more people die in elevators (what the hell) then they do from ...

The sweet child had his room filled with toys But the angry demon boys--------------------------(this part seemed like a little too wierd- lil demon boys reminds me of 666 or the ...

((((((((if weed is not your subject then go to rap or dramatic poetry- whatever your in))))))----but if you love weed--then enjoy this song!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a hot day outside Global ...

wow- this is like the second vursion of my other song called ignore the stuck up fags- your basically sending the same message i didbut who cares- good song bra- ...

seems like u care for this guy a little too much- but thats good because i have a girlfriend and she is exactly the same-----------------since your my friend on this ...

Two man where sitting on a street bench, both of them where wearing a Brown sport coats, open with vest and a brown tie, a brown fedora-narrow brim hat, and ...

perhapse a little it more words and lines into this one but good job man

Here we go (Music starts) As I run through the -battle ground The screams are heard -all around As the mines explode -into the air The soldier’s are- feeling the ...

k- so my computer is fized now (finaly)- and so i'm back and running- this is the first poem i read from you since like two months ago and i ...

Give me weed Pound or two Take out all the seeds and sticks So my head won’t transfix With twisting and twirling And whirling I smoke the most On April ...

hey can you go on myspace and tell me why there is no chapter 2 for this tory--because i was looking for it and found nothing---maybe you spelled the story ...

to be completely honest i had no idea what the hell was going on during the whole time i mean there is o location, no weather, no condition exept for ...

this was as short as a midget compared to a giant, the poem made sence but add some more stuff to it