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The sweet child had his room filled with toys But the angry demon boys--------------------------(this part seemed like a little too wierd- lil demon boys reminds me of 666 or the ...

wow- this is like the second vursion of my other song called ignore the stuck up fags- your basically sending the same message i didbut who cares- good song bra- ...

seems like u care for this guy a little too much- but thats good because i have a girlfriend and she is exactly the same-----------------since your my friend on this ...

k- so my computer is fized now (finaly)- and so i'm back and running- this is the first poem i read from you since like two months ago and i ...

hey can you go on myspace and tell me why there is no chapter 2 for this tory--because i was looking for it and found nothing---maybe you spelled the story ...

to be completely honest i had no idea what the hell was going on during the whole time i mean there is o location, no weather, no condition exept for ...

Lordgluzman has a point there a poetry such as this needs more words in it i felt like it ended at the same pointe it started (these where my favorite ...

IMAGERY--emerald grass swished in heavy wind As much as you can, shove it in. METAPHORE--the sun kissed the valley. This should be required in every poem. RHYTHM--La-la, la-la; la-la-la, la-la-la... ...

as i was reading the story i noticed that it is really creative but there where lots of commas missing if you care about that or not----------also “I am dieing ...

i personaly thought that the poem was good- you got a point there about how the wind has been everywhere, and what it has seen-----------a good enique song------------ --------------awsome------

The night dissolves beneath me, I awake to the atmosphere of war, The house shaking, Beneath the rumble of the planes. Voices rise between my family,--------------------------------family--house Tears

dude this song was awsome-----these where my favorite lines (((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((So many pity lives))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Being shot and stabbed by knifes Shouts and

relaxing would be the best word to describe this one - i mean if i was goign to bed or was chilling somewhere on a little green hill looking at ...