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defiitly long- like this was a rap long not a heavy metal long-

shit!!!!!!!!!!!!teamwork is better the the original crap---------------just team up withthis guy and your poems will be better but ot your stories because those are already good

ok enough with this junk about weed being bad if you havent tried it then dont judge it more people die in elevators (what the hell) then they do from ...

perhapse a little it more words and lines into this one but good job man

this was as short as a midget compared to a giant, the poem made sence but add some more stuff to it

no offense but this does not sound like a song- it's more of a poem for twilight there is basically no lyrics at all in this, it's a poem

nice-------very touching this was my favorite one dou (Verse 2) I miss you dear mommy Can you hear my voice? I’m standing here waiting To be your first choice NICE

interesting-----------interesting-------------interesting---------- this is a good one keep wirting stuff like this also i like the name of the song- it's really cool

i don't really know if this is rap or not- but if you would rap this for like a heavy metal beat i should say- then it would be really ...

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------i besically made a part 2 to this song just names it (((Teenage love)))- so if an

first comment- GOOD

relaxing would be the best word to describe for this- i mean if i was goign to bed or was chilling somewhere on a lil green hill looking at the ...

sorry everyone that this song is rated PG-13 and not rated R, my friend asked me to make it PG-13 just so he would be able to see it---yes i ...

sorry everyone that this song is rated PG-13 and not rated R, my friend asked me to make it PG-13 just so he would be able to c it---yes i ...

sorry everyone that this is rated PG-13, and yes this song does sux because i really did not want to give away anything good- sory