1stViolinS.C.

Hi... First, I like this story. It's been several times before ;), but I've never read one that has another suitor competing for the girl ;). But anyways, hold on ...

Renee yawned, and rolled over. She had, surprisingly, slept through the night almost peacefully, which was a relief. She sat up, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. “Morning,” greeted ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review one of these, but here I am ;). I actually had a hard time finding something to say about it besides ...

Okay, I really want people to read this. Please review it!!! I need to know what you think ;D. If I don't get reviews, my brain backlashes on me and ...

Hey everybody! I just wanted to say that I've based some of this on the movie about this, The Nativity Story, just because it gives more details on everyday life ...

Wow! I really like this. This is amazing, I love Harry Potter books and pretty much anything having to do with them. Still, just in my personal opinion, you should ...

I was chosen; I have not done anything extraordinary, anything that is more than someone else is capable of doing. The only thing I have done is to be my ...

Hey again! This chapter, like the others before it, is pretty good. However, they are a couple things that confused me a little bit. First, when do we find out ...

Hey again! This, like the chapters before it, is pretty good. However, there are a couple things that confused me. First of all, I never really understand quite why she ...

Hey, this is only the second story I've posted on here, so be nice. Also, PM me if you want me to put more of it. Chapter One “Three, two, ...

AUGH!!! I can't believe the chapter ended! I can't believe that Jared has a new girlfriend! Anyways, I like your story. I really couldn't find much to critique about it. ...

Okay, first of all, this sounds very British. The other chapters didn't sound that way to me, so you need to either change the other chapters to sound British, or ...

He gave me a hug that I was so much in needed for. [quote] Here, this needs to say "that I was in need for" or "that I needed so ...

Why did it end?!? This was such an amazing story!!! I really hope that you are planning on writing more of this. I will be forever stuck reading these 18 ...

Why did it end?!? This was such an amazing story!!! I really hope that you are planning on writing more of this. I will be forever stuck reading these 18 ...