1stViolinS.C.

I love this! It's so sweet. Even though I'm assuming this is an unedited draft, you should still use punctuation and stuff. It just makes it easier to read the ...

Aw! I love this! It's so cute. I love it when stories end happily like that. Still, you kinda need punctuation and stuff. It just makes it easier to read. ...

Hey! I like this story. It's pretty cool. There are a couple things you should fix though. One, Matt (not Mark, right?) talks about the B-something (sorry, I can't remember ...

Okay. I really, really, like this story. It's got a really unique storyline. I hope you write lots more of it soon.:) The only thing is that in some spots, ...

Okay, I can see what the story is supposed to be, but it's hard to read. You probably don't want to hear this, but it will most definitely be better ...

Wow. This was really interesting. I have to say that I've honestly never thought about anybody writing anything like that in a Harry Potter story. It was very creative. Something ...

Ashton trudged across the hot sand. It was Monday, the second week of her summer-long vacation at Surfside Beach, South Carolina. The sun beat down on her head as she ...

Oh, wow, I completely love it. You have my approval :wink: . Something you may want to think about changing, though, is that there are parts where the characters go ...

Ashton trudged across the hot sand. It was Monday, the second week of her summer-long vacation in Surfside Beach, South Carolina. The sun beat down on her head as she ...

This is a really creative story, but I would have enjoyed reading it more if it wasn't quite so long, and if there was more punctuation. If you want to ...

This is a really good story. I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing I would recommend fixing right now is that at the beginning, it moves kinda fast. You ...