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Hi Creeper! There were a few nice, short chapters. Not much happens, but Jessica is looking for Poppy, and there is a terrifying wing master who seems to know what ...

Hi Junebug! This is my favourite poem of yours yet. It's one I heavily relate to, and though I am way out of high school now, the feelings still weigh ...

Hi, this is a really lovely poem with beautiful imagery that builds up a scene very vividly in my head. I often think these same things when I am reading ...

Hi Creeper! This was a nice short collection of tales. Most were about Annabelle, and it might have been nice to compile all the Annabelle stories into one, then do ...

Hi! Back again! Eylin's characterisation is really nicely done here, through what she notices about other people. The mystery being set up over what happened to the village is really ...

Hi! Hope you are doing well today/tonight/whatever time it is for you! This poem reads to me like an accusation aimed at a god, or some sort of chosen one, ...

Hi again! I enjoyed your last work, so I wanted to come and check this one out again. I like that it involves drugs, something a little darker & than ...

Hi! This is a really charming first chapter. I really enjoyed it, and I am looking forward to more. I like how it was slow-moving, and not much action, and ...

Hello again! Back for another two chapters. The pace of these two was really nice, and kept me interested throughout. I do agree with Tikaya though that it might be ...

Hey Sebastian! I've been really loving your work and reviews lately, good job! Hope you keep it up! I love the idea presented in this short piece. I am an ...

Hi! I'm here to review your poem this morning Maybe this is how fathers and sons are.. two oceans facing each other, This is a very strong and interesting opening; ...

HI I loved the fight scene. I was really looking forward to it. The pacing is immaculate and doesn't feel too slow or too quick, and it really drew me ...

Hi creeper. I loved the story I read yesterday so when i saw you'd posted another one i was so excited. This piece is excellent. It moves at a quick ...

Hi Creeper! I loved this story a lot. There's so much improvement in your writing lately it has been amazing to see. This really swept me in and kept me ...

Hi! This is a very interesting start to a story. The King's dialogue is quite unsettling, and I really like this detail. The use of all capital letters combined with ...