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Hi Amanda! I'm finally getting around to reviewing your story! I really love the opening with the doe, especially the description of nocking the arrow and pulling it taut. The ...

I'm staying still Trying to make it over that hill I like the metaphor that you have going on in this poem, and this is a nice opening; however, since ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS, and well done on posting your first piece! It's a very short piece, but it's doing a lot. There is a real sense of disorientation in ...

Hi! I've been meaning to get to this for ages; apologies that I am only getting to it now! This is a very interesting chapter that sets up the tension ...

Hi Sebastian, hope YWS is treating you well! This is a raw and honest, unpolished account of a first love, and it has real strength because of the emotional arc. ...

HIIII I am back again. Couldn't keep away!! I really love the characters. That is the strongest point of this chapter for me, and I am so excited to get ...

OKAY, COLOUR ME (even more) INTRIGUED. This is so good, and so unique, and I need more right now. The fleshy throat-mouth thing in Chrissie's wardrobe is written with almost ...

Omg, so hello, I am finally getting here... I am gonna admit I don't know what Digimon is. Well, I know it's a franchise and a TV show, but beyond ...

Hi Viv! I read this poem yesterday, and it left such an impact that I had to go away and think about it for a while before I left a ...

Hi! I'm here to review this piece of fanfiction this morning! Now, I have never seen Loki, but I think I know what it's about! Sylvie's sadness and heartbreak really ...

soRRY it took me so long to get to the next chapter... life.... work... boring... blah. This was a very overwhelming chapter - IN A GOOD WAY - but also ...

Ooh I am excited to review this song, I don't see many on here! This is a very melancholic song about growing up and the world not feeling the same ...

Hi! This is a really interesting poem. The metaphor is very strong, and I love the fact you build up some mythology around it! I'm the color of the sky ...

I like how you subvert the expectations of a romantic poem and make it the opposite: someone realising they no longer love a person, and all the reasons why. I ...

Hi Creeper!!! I'm back... again! I love the atmosphere of this piece. The atmosphere is prioritised over the plot, and it makes a nice change. There's a lot of beautiful ...