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This is a really heavy poem, and I can really feel the emotion shining through your words. I hope you are feeling okay now, and if not, hopefully you have ...

I have had my fair share of toxic friendships/relationships, and I know how awful they can be. I am so glad you made it out and chose to share this ...

Hi! I love that you wrote this in Japanese! I haven't seen that before on YWS. It looks awesome, and although I don't know Japanese so I can't review that ...

Hi again! This is a massive improvement from the last chapter, and I'm excited to read more! The overall story is moving on nicely. Noah is moving to Colorado and ...

How can a broken mug hurt me this much? Honestly, even without any of the other emotional stuff, I still get hurt when any of my mugs break. I had ...

Hi Creeper! In this story, we follow Mary, a horror-loving teenager who summons a demon boy called Tancredi to punish her brother Mike, who has been tormenting her. While Tancredi ...

On the surface level, this reads like a reflection on the state of healthcare in the UK because literally I don't remember the last time I went to the dentist, ...

This is such a cool way to display a poem. I absolutely love it. The different fonts really give it that nostalgia, with most of it being written in a ...

Hello! I am excited to review this first chapter of yours! This is a very sweet opening chapter to what I assume is a young adult or teen coming of ...

Hi Swazi! Welcome to yws and congratulations on sharing your first piece of writing! This is a really sad piece, but one I am sure many can relate too, including ...

This is such a devastating poem. It reads more like a long stream of consciousness: the worries that worm around in your brain when you can't sleep at night, when ...

Hi creeper! Another nice little story. Aside from the mention of Cadell's parents, there's nothing creepy here really, just two sweet little kids! Cadell watched closely from the bushes. The ...

This is a really poignant and sad poem. I like how the length of the stanzas changes throughout the poem, giving it a level of uncertainty that fits well with ...

Hi there! I loved your short story. The concept is really good, and the whole thing builds up a lot of suspense and intrigue throughout the narrative. I love stories ...

Hi! Back again for another review. This one was simple, creepy and even a little touching with the relationship between Keir and Mara! Keir licked off the blood in his ...