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Hey again! I used to love creepypasta stories when I was younger so i was super excited when i saw mentions of Laughing Jack and Jason the Toymaker! Positive Elements: ...

Chapter Four begins with a very chaotic scene; the sudden announcement of a new contest to select a queen among the different dragon tribes. This causes a lot of confusion ...

Chapter Three of 'Wetfire' effectively sets the bigger stage for the story with descriptive language and an obvious focus on the plot, through the gathering of dragons from different tribes ...

In this second chapter of the book, the protagonist, Silver, visits a bar named the Broken Talon (i like the bar name!) in search of someone to talk to about ...

This chapter opening of "Wetfire" provides us a glimpse inside the interesting world of dragons.The protagonist, Silver, is a Nightwing dragon who is concerned about her brother Midnight, who has ...

Hi again! It’s hard being the “stick in the mud” in a relationship (Most commonly a romantic one) . You only care about the other person. You’re just trying to ...

I've been meaning to review this poem for a few days now and I'm finally getting around to it now so apologies! This poem is written beautifully, and honestly I ...

Hey there again! Wow, I think this poem really effectively conveys the idea of the societal pressure put on girls to conform to maturity at a young age and how ...

One of the strengths of this poem is the clear and concise language used to convey the idea of immortality. The use of this simple language and your direct way ...

Hey there! This isn't a full review but I do have some thoughts to offer that will hopefully help! Take my heart while it’s still beating I’ll place it with ...

This poem is a beautiful and melancholic take on the fragility of the places and memories that we hold dearest. Your use of imagery and language paint a vivid and ...

(i had an idea for a different way to review so you are my test subject aha) Ha! I, Dionysus, the god of wine and revelry, am delightfully amused by ...

This poem is a charming and somewhat whimsical take on the common affliction of the flu. The rhyme scheme is playful and bouncy, just like a sneeze or a cough, ...

Hi there! Green here to review :-) The slamming of fists against a steering wheel, screams and sobs of anger and pain I can really visualise this female anger! I ...

Chapter One: I like the opening sentence In a dark, nearly forgotten house, was a little ghost girl named Samara Robinson. Little Samara was a mischievous ghost who was only ...