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Hey, Che here for a quick review! First off, for a draft/quick idea this was honestly really good! I could really relate to the point you were trying to get ...

Hey there, Che here for a quick review :-) First of all, I will just say that this has to be one of my favourite poem's that I've read on ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! :-) I really enjoyed this poem/song. I could tell it had a lot of raw emotion that made it a very touching poem. ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) I will start by pointing out some grammatical errors I spotted, then move on to the things I liked about it. Every ...

Hey there! Che there for a quick review :-) First of all, this story broke my heart! I could see where you were taking it and I was really hoping ...

Hey! Che here for a quick review :-) I liked this poem! It spoke the truth, and I thought that the odd structure and rhyme scheme/meter actually added to the ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) First off, I honestly loved this poem. It was just written extremely well and flows so well. The imagery is so strong ...

I saw you posted a part four to this and I realise I hadn't read the other three parts so here I am! I liked this! It was funny- Jilly ...

Hey! I'll just note what I notice as I read through and conclude at the end :-) First, You start a lot of sentences with the pronoun "I" which can ...

I don't know if this is what you meant, but I'll go over grammar for you :-) First picture: It's "Opposite" not opisite. It would make more sense to say ...

Hey :-) Che here for a quick review! First of all, this poem had a very clear message that you got across to me. It was very emotive and brings ...

Hey there :-) First off, I thought that the imagery in this poem was very strong and came across very well. I loved that you compared emotions to nature and ...

Hey there! So, I really liked the imagery that came across in the story/dream. It was very vivid and I could picture it very well! However, so many sentences started ...

This was not what I expected when I clicked on the title! This made me chuckle a few times, especially the bit "You may experience some confusion," she said dully. ...

I'm sat here in my science lesson, not paying attention to something I probably should be, totally enthralled by your poem! Honestly, i cannot think of anything to critique or ...