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Re: On The Edges - Final Part Completed Short Story)
Okay, a much shorter review for these last few vignettes! It's a nice ending, but it doesn't pack the punch it could do. I don't really know why. I like ...
Sep 7 -
Re: On The Edges - Part 1 (Completed Short Story)
Hello! I wanted to review a long piece and yours was the longest in the greenroom I think, so I've spent a lot of time on it this morning! This ...
Sep 7 -
Re: WoS Ch3 - A Role Model
FINALLY BACK WOO I loved this chapter. The dialogue sections and character building seemed effortlessly intertwined with the fight scene, which was PERFECTLY written to the point that I kinda ...
Sep 7 -
Re: The notes you never got
Hi! I don't usually review romance so I thought i would give something outside of my usual genre a chance. The opening sets up a bit of mystery; Kat has ...
Sep 7 -
Re: “You can’t save everybody, Jack” (Chapter Four-Chapter Six)
Hi Creeper! Hope you are doing well
Sep 7 -
Re: holding you
Hi! I read this when you first published it and loved it so much, I knew I had to come back and give it a review. I like how you ...
Sep 6 -
Re: A Flatline Is Not Always Simple.
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I thought this was an interesting analysis of an idea, and you've done it in a little amount of words ...
Sep 5 -
Re: .
Hi June! Happy RevMo. You've been killing it with your reviews and poems lately! This is a very heavy and sad poem. You detail the feelings so beautifully, from just ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Paadruman, The Tales of Farting [Ch. VII, Nine]
Hello! I am back again to review chapter 7! There was A LOT happening in the chapter. I did really enjoy the GREAT Grim Reaper part the most; it also ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Academic Validation
Hi Alex! I thought I'd look through old poems for my RevMo checklist, and this title stood out to me, so here we go! Firstly, I can heavily relate to ...
Sep 4 -
Re: The perfect childhood
Hi, welcome to YWS and congratulations on posting your first piece! This is certainly an interesting concept to explore. Your own childhood not being good enough, missing out on the ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Ready for portraits
I love how this piece really builds up tension entirely through physical detail rather than exposition. It's a really nice touch and a nice change from a lot of stories ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Nine
Hello Creeper! I've been looking forward to the next part of this, so here we go. The imagery here is really strong and creepy, especially the part with Isobelle, which ...
Sep 4 -
Re: WoS Ch2 - Enter: Kouji
Sorry it took me so long, i wrote a bunch and lost internet and it hadn't saved so if i remember anything else i'll come back and edit this XD ...
Sep 3 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 3 (still WIP)
Hi! Sorry it took me a while to get around to this part. I like how distinct all the characters speak and feel from each other; it makes it easy ...
Sep 3