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Thank you Bambi! You hit the nail on the head there. I also wonder when we will be able to exist and create without needing likes and comments. I love ...

text version: i must let everyone i know know that i do things too (but i don’t have anyone) buy ourselves old cameras and go and pose for photos in ...

Oh I hadn’t realised that! Maybe you could add a heading that says their name to show it’s changed? Or mention Paisley’s name at the start?

Tysm for including this because apparently the image of the actual poems is not viewable in my region 🥲

You would probably love Ravi from my previous chapters XD I love unlikeable characters too

Thank you so much for the review! I do need to cut some exposition so your feedback was really helpful

oo that's so interesting to know! Thank you for explaining!

I'M SAYING NOTHING (BUT YOU SHOULD BE A DETECTIVE)

awh thank you! that's such a compliment coming from such a brilliant poet as yourself!

thank you for the review messy!! I think you are right about the line breaks and I will have a little re edit later! You've nailed it with the interpretation, ...

You always have such amazing insight and I'm really grateful!! I'm glad the little brother idea works for you. Perhaps he is also gay, and he is dating a boy ...

OKAY I HAD AN IDEA: So if I establish in part one not only Greer's backstory of the shadows being set up and rescuing kids, but that Clem actually ran ...

ah yee i was taking a risk with this chapter. I think it will be set up better when I add a chapter or two to Part One. There are ...

thank you bambi! You're very right, i wanted to evoke parasitic imagery! It was about a toxic friendship I had where I felt as though she copied a lot of ...

Aaa thank you Tikaa for your lovely review !’ You are right about the A/N I think I am too critical I assume people will instantly hate my work 🥲