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text version; E. my fingers trace the hole you left when you entered, my skin swollen and tender. you made your way inside and drank me up, lapping at the ...

tysm for the review. I think you're right and it definitely could be two separate chapters, i mainly stuck together the two parts because it set up for the next ...

Some questions you could answer after reading, if you wanted!: 1. Did Bronson read as menacing to you, or was it unclear what (if anything) there was to be worried ...

Some questions you could answer after reading: 1. Lottie saves the life of the person who blackmailed her about her brother and forced her to help him try to infect ...

I’ll work on a review for this tomorrow but I just had to comment that this is my favourite chapter yet and it literally felt like I was reading a ...

Ah I thought that would be it! Translation is very tricky so despite that it’s obviously still a brilliant poem!

thank you so much for your kind review! i'm going to be honest and say i can't quite remember my intention behind the comma in the meat and sweet spring ...

aa that would make more sense!

thank you so much for the kind review! I think you are right; the "it's dwynwen who is burnt" definitely doesn't flow as well. I shall have to have a ...

thank you for your review!

In traditional Welsh folklore, Dwynwen is the patron saint of all lovers. She wanted to marry her love, Maelon, but her dad, Brychan, didn't like the look of him and ...

Good luck with the finals!!

tysm for the review! I think you're very right about the opening summary. I was trying a bit hard to work on Rev's voice/tone and didn't intersperse it with enough ...

Hmm yes i definitely need to write in more about he escaped! The chapter ended up much longer than I thought than when I went back to edit I just ...

I know this isn't perfect, but hoping you like what I've done with Rev and introducing him to two personal faves!