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Oo that sounds like a great idea!

Thank you for your review, Alice!

Honestly, the whole sequence was fun but HARD to write. I knew the crawler had to escape outside (for a later plot point), but figuring out how was so hard. ...

tysm for picking up on that editing error. I went to fix it and i've said 'Lola snapped' way too many times XD The encounter happened in what is kind ...

thank you for the review! I don't really know why I dislike this chapter. I think i was unsure how to bridge between katie's death and lola dealing with the ...

you should definitely consider writing a full-length novel about this! it's an awesome concept

Ugh yeah you’re so right about this chapter. A lot is missing and it doesn’t feel like it makes total sense. I think in my rewrite I’ll have an entire ...

Thank you for the review! I think you actually have a point with Lottie having other patients to attend to. Maybe I should have either had a second nurse she ...

Thank you for your review! I definitely plan on revising it and adding more parts in the future, if not turning it into a novella or novel! Your feedback really ...

there's genuinely so much that sucks about this part ughhhh. This came from an assignment that had a 7,500 word limit and of course i picked a story that i ...

Thank you for your kind review! There are seven chapters previous to this one if you are ever interested to read more

you're very right about the scene where she's being experimented on. I'll be honest and say that when writing it, i knew she needed to pretend to be asleep after ...

i think you're right, but they're still fun movies. The animatronics were awesome and i loveee mike XD

omg i sent this before i was finished writing because i was scared the time was gonna be up, i'll finish it off tomorrow

i definitely will keep posting this! But there are only 4 parts at the moment (i had a strict word count and it was for an assignment!) so i am ...