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oh i see! the rest of your suggestion does actually work much better, my bad aha

thanks! I changed up my reviewing style as I wanted to really appreciate the entirety of a piece, whereas before I think I focused too much on specific parts.

Thank you so much! I think you're right in saying that swim would fit better, but the idea i was trying to portray was his open mouth was hanging the ...

thank you so much! I love how detailed your reviews are!

Thank you!

thank you for the review!

hey there! Just wanted to let you know that it's not really fair to gain reviews by just posting random words!

no worries, i think you can read without an account! this is my re-write of the Jeff the killer story lol: I will take a look at all your stories!

yeah i do still like creepypasta tbh! and i'd love to read them! i wrote a lot of fanction myself, years ago. none is posted on here but i can ...

thank you! this means a lot!!

omg exciting i will read and review when i get the chance!!

i chose to write the story this was as the first chapter begins with the aftermath of the riot described in this part lol. The first chapter is posted if ...

thank you so much for your review! The bird people are just the like, care-free people dancing around on new years eve, as the speaker of the poem is sat ...

yeah, i mentioned that at the top. Each chapter is intersliced with a police interview. This is the prologue lol.

thank you so much! it means a lot