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thank you so much! Yeah, I'm never sure how to structure my poems so i just kinda write it and hope for the best.

thank you so much! Sorry for the late reply!

thank you so much, and i am so sorry that my reply is so late oml

Thank you so much

Thank you so much for the review

Thank you so much for spotting my typo's as always.

Thank you for catching my typo's and for the review

Yeah I use google docs too, and for some of my longer pieces it can be so annoying to go through and add in italics, ugh

%u201CCastle, you%u2019re one of my kids,%u201D The emphasis on that one word made all the difference. Two things. One, this is a really touching moment. Perhaps the most touching moment. ...

'we're moving house' is just a shorter, more casual way of 'we're moving to a new house' when people speak they don't conform to grammar rules lmao or we'd all ...

That's weird lol. Like, when I moved house I would say to my friends 'I'm moving house tomorrow' or 'I just moved house' because if I were to say 'I ...

Thank you! And yeah, this wasn't meant to be as fast paced as it was but I didn't know how else to write it, aha. Mum was still trying to ...

Thank you :-)

No problem! And don't worry - I never spot typos in my own work which is why I love this site!

Thank you for the review :-) These are actually song lyrics, rather than a poem, which is why there is a lot of repetitive language :-)