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Thank you so much! I'll try add in some more of her personality when I go back to edit :-)

Honestly no I've had time to think about it, I'm just being stupid. I asked for a review and that's what I got! If I were to actually try get ...

Thank you lol. I'm thinking that basically I am going to just write the whole story, go through and SEVERELY edit it and then re-upload it onto here when I'm ...

Thank you so much :-) This honestly made me smile, you're so sweet!

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...

Thank you again, but i'll be blunt as well: this was really upsetting to read. I know I asked you to review and honestly I am so grateful that you've ...

Thank you again for the review, it was really helpful. Though there are some things you critique that I disagree with - I guess we just prefer different styles aha ...

Ahhh thank you so much for this, it's honestly been so helpful. Obviously this is only a first draft so I haven't yet gone through and edited/re-worded it, I'm just ...

No problem, I'm actually going to go and read the previous chapters now!

No problem, and thank you for writing it and giving me motivation!

Ah I'm glad you agree aha, I always get worried that when I post reviews I'll upset someone! I'm probably going to go and read all the other chapters of ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! This feedback has been particularly helpful, as I always make my sentences too long and never realise aha! And yes, they are both girls ...

No problem, and I do hope you are inspired to write some more!

Thank you so much for this review, it is honestly so helpful as everything you said has helped me to improve my work! I'll try and explain some things aha. ...