4revgreen

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much! I have added punctuation to my word document copy as that is something a lot of people have picked out! So I know that's something I ...

Thank you! I am not religious so have no explicit views on this topic myself but it was based off of a quote from the TV show "Hannibal" where they ...

Thank you! I am not religious so have no explicit views on this topic myself but it was based off of a quote from the TV show "Hannibal" where they ...

Thank you! I am not religious so have no explicit views on this topic myself but it was based off of a quote from the TV show "Hannibal" where they ...

Thank you! And this is a little spoiler here but no, they aren't both hers. I won't go any further into it! And also, no, he doesn't know her name ...

thank you so much! Oh, lol, just a thing, my username is actuatllt 4revgreen not 4ever!

Thank you so much!!! Honestly this has made my day, and probably my week too!

Thank you so much!!! Honestly this has made my day, and probably my week too!

thank you so much! A lot have people have said about the punctuation so that is definitely something I will work on! :-)

thank you so much! And i will take all of that into account when I edit :-)

ahh no problem! I tend to have the same problem with long sentences myself :-)

Thank you for the review! I tried to hint at the fact that Spike is not mentally stable, that he has schizophrenia or something like that; he heard the trees ...

thank you so much! And don't worry about sounding harsh; everyone needs a critic!

Thank you so much! Honestly it means a lot to have your opinion on this :-) Hopefully I can expand on the story more when I get round to it!