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Ahhh thank you! I'm terrible with commas aha so thank you for pointing out where I don't need them

Thank you so much! And I will take into consideration what you have mentioned!

Thank you so much !

Thank you so much! With the comma thing, I kind of intended it to be that way to show it was all said quickly without pauses? I can see where ...

Thank you so much! With the comma thing, I kind of intended it to be that way to show it was all said quickly without pauses? I can see where ...

In England, it's spelled favourite :-) And I meant operating theatres, which are real things! I promise! I'm pretty sure you can choose to go by Ms. as well; it's ...

Thank you for pointing out my grammatical errors! It's really helpful, as I'm a terrible proof reader when it comes to my own writing. Thank you for taking the time ...

This is actually very annoying. I would prefer an actual review, please don't comment this again

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you for the review! With the maroon, i just meant my school jumper was now maroon, so not that clever. I see what you mean about impact and I ...

No problem :-)

Thank you for the review! I never thought about an intercom and that's actually such a good idea!

Thank you for pointing out those little things! I'm rubbish with punctuation so it means a lot! And thank you so much for thr review

uh, woah, thank I guess! Very, ahem, detailed review there. There are two previous chapters if you would care to read them :-0

no problem! And cheers