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Ok then I didnt lyk it bcause it didnt make sense: Ashen clouds hang pregnant with rain. How can clouds be pregnant?!! It just doesnt make sense!

ew that is so gross u and ayra both r bad writers. sorry but this isnt good.

why arent u replying? u should when some1 comments on ur writing!!!

just because my poem isnt lyk urs and u dont lyk it doesnt mean u have 2 b so mean about it!!!!! my poems r just diferent

hey wat hapened 2 my title??????

tis is so long why wuld any1 ever read teh whole thing?!!!!!!

omg ayra + monki why r u so mean? those are bad reviews and they will hurt gothfirls feellings this is actualy an amazin poem guys why u so mean?????????????????????????????????

omg u r lyk not a vry gud writer.

like ur oter piece tis is ****! 'curdled moonlight'? how can moonlight b curdled? and how can pine trees be dusky?

tis is the bigest piece of **** ive ever seen b4 in my life!