AEChronicle

Thanks for the review Timmy! As for the text in bold, I first had it italicized, but it just was to hard to actually read, and I even found myself ...

That would be great. Then I could better understand this story.

And sorry this has been a Greenie for awhile, I forget to click the 'Oldest' button sometimes.

Thank you for the review. And I see your point about Bodorr killing his father. Going on the advice of another, I have decided to turn this explanation of the ...

I understand now, it was just confusing when I read it. In that case, you might consider adding in a little 'that's what we call it' in your story, so ...

I wish.

Lol, I went through and looked up all my names on Google. Half of them are closely related to LOTR or some branch of it. For example: Gnashtahk, in my ...

Thanks for the review. You actually pointed out a few good things that I will change, to make it flow better and be easier to understand. As for the names ...

Lol, I love that word to :D

Yah, I know. But this one was different. It wasn't because it made me notice a lot of problems with my work. I was mad, literally, because this guy was ...

Still not so sure, though. I got a terrible review, and even though I think the guy was just being impudent and rude, it made me think.

Is my work really that good? I mean, honestly, there are only a handful of people who actually read my stuff, so I have no idea if it's actually worth ...